Comments 13 Feb

Good to see you dividing tasks and each putting suggestions into the blog record.  Make sure you maintain momentum and finish your storyboards swiftly.

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Characterise the guy who shows up

• Costume
• Makeup

On farm, need vantage points to show the area
A trip to the area would be advised since only sam has been there before.

Feedback Wed 28 Jan

You need to make sure that the strong setting idea does not obliterate the development of plot and character. 'People turning up at remote farm and getting killed' is more of a horror motif (think Texas Chainsaw Massacre). Devise some enigma and focus on character development so the audience will comprehend the reasons and sympathize with the victims.